I give you props. It's not easy working in ink since you can't undo any mistakes. I like the perspective. It was a good choice to make her seem like a towering demon and made something simple look extravagant. I like the background and the criss-crossing lines. Surprising how something that easy can add so much atmosphere. My only suggestion is that since this is so simple you really could have gone crazy with the detail on the dress.
Thanks a lot for your in-depth comment, I really appreciate it. The dress lacks detail because I was going for a "living shadow" kind of feel, but now there are ideas for a spider-themed dress creeping into my head...
I encourage you to go after that dress. What I meant by details was keeping them concentrated in that area where the spider web was already formed. That way the uppper body still had a shadowy feel while the lower half kept the eyes interested.
The dress lacks detail because I was going for a "living shadow" kind of feel, but now there are ideas for a spider-themed dress creeping into my head...
how long did it take u ??
Unfortunately I don't remember how long that took.